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Howard Fox's avatar

From Geoff Dale via email: Indeed quite charming and ended as I expected. More of a mini novel than a story this time. No complaints, just an observation. Good stuff Howard.

Bob's avatar

Howie! This one really pulled me in. What started as a simple wrong-number text turned into something I couldn’t stop reading, and I found myself smiling the whole way through. Your humor feels so natural—like I’m sitting there listening to you tell the story in person—and those little offhand lines are what really got me.

I’ll be honest, I even caught myself thinking about the choices along the way and where it was all headed, which made it that much more engaging. It’s funny, a little bold, and just human enough to feel real underneath it all. I genuinely enjoyed this one.

Howard Fox's avatar

Thanks Bob! It means a lot. My goal with this one was to be more organic, worried about situations, characters, dialogue without punching it up with jokes just to add more funny.

Moo's avatar

Finally read. Extremely great. If it weren't for a few Fox one-liners, I'd have thought this was written by someone else. Quite different from you. Shows great versatility. M.

Howard Fox's avatar

Thanks Jer! My goal was to keep the witting more organic with less punching up with jokes.

Jack Jackson's avatar

Very nice. I’m with Bob on this one. I love your jokes, but this was special!

Howard Fox's avatar

Thanks! You made my day!

Debra Douglas's avatar

True love and Napoleons! Addictive combination!

Howard Fox's avatar

Hard to resist!

DW Davis's avatar

Regarding your disclaimer, apparently there were several of that kind of "Happy Endings." Great story.

Howard Fox's avatar

Yep. Thanks for coming by to read it. I’m grateful for friends like you!

Steve Bosox's avatar

Nice story, Howie. The only unrealistic part was the wife’s reaction to him fessing up. My body would never be found. She’s from NJ. 🤣🤣

Howard Fox's avatar

lol! I’m sure your body will be somewhere within the Meadowlands.

LizM's avatar

This one is pure Woody Allen: laughed my tuckes off!

Howard Fox's avatar

Awww, thanks! But please put your tuchas back. Certain body functions require it.

LizM's avatar

LOL!

Howard Fox's avatar

From Julie Stern via email: This may be your best! I can see this turned into a rom-com easily.